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Justify with pictorial elements. PROPOSITION DE CORRIGÉ Quote showing why zoning law of 1916 was voted: “Concerned about the diminishing sunlight and fresh air in the canyon like streets, created by the closely massed skyscrapers of lower Manhattan…”. Pour vous abonner, merci de recharger votre compte. Ce document est un article tiré de theguardian.com qui a été publié le 11 août 2015. H�\�͎�@��. Les gratte-ciel ne sont pas une nouveauté de nos jours (nowadays), ni dans les années 80. h�b```�"��B A� �Ȝ``�Z�`ԿV�H�5��d��X| BTS session 2010 Anglais Corrigé indicatif I. COMPRÉHENSION 10 points Ce texte intitulé « Even when the recession ends, value- not brand - may rule sales » est un extrait du Week-end Argus, (Afrique du Sud) publié le 15 Août 2009. If we raise, enough funds to renew all the buildings , the tourists will come back and go, sightseeing again. Document A A. N'hésitez pas à visiter notre réseau de sites pour vous perfectionner gratuitement en anglais, espagnol, allemand, italien, néerlandais, français, mathématiques, culture générale. An photoshopped image of what New York could be, by the “architecture group for Smart City Design, Ecological planning, and Art”. People would get, line 4 . You are, Emma/Phil Wilson, one of these students. de livres et documents numériques ! Il fallait ďieŶ liƌe la ĐoŶsigŶe et Đhoisiƌ deuǆ sujets. Pay also attention to how both men are described in the original text. Lee Hiller déclare qu'il est plus relaxant de travailler dans des endroits qui acceptent les tatouages non pas parce que les employés travaillent moins, mais parce qu'ils ont le droit d'être eux-mêmes. It, also shows a testimony of the 30 glorious when the USA were the superpower, The 3 documents represent the mythical road in different ways.The first one, symbolises the conquest and travelling while the second one insists on the idea. Votre discours, comme dans toute argumentation, devait être construit et logique : utilisation de. “The Ritz Tower […] forty‐one stories high. Noǁ it’s iŶ daŶger , it Ŷeeds help to ďe ďorŶ agaiŶ . Three types of construction: Bridges, pavement in Chelsea, apartment buildings, subway. ©2020 Up2School, SAS. people were hopeful for a bright future. The overall mood in the passage is irritation. Firstly, we have characters resenting the disappearance of the countryside at the beginning of the, Secondly, we see cities trying to circumcise the skyscrapers mushrooming over 1920 Manhattan, islaŶd, ďig ďuildiŶgs shoǁiŶg ƌiĐh people’s ǁealth. Voici le corrigé du sujet de bac d’anglais LV1 2016 proposé aux séries générales (S-ES-L). N’oublie pas de répondre aux 4 WH- avec systématiquement les numéros de ligne associés à la citation choisie. le ƌespeĐt de la ĐoŶsigŶe ;Ŷoŵďƌe de ŵots, …Ϳ, l’adĠƋuatioŶ et la peƌtiŶeŶĐe de ǀos idĠes, -la correction de la langue (grammaire, lexique et syntaxe), nécessitait une forme avec guillement et tiret. The law was adopted in 1916 because the city authorities were “, concerned about diminishing sunlight and fresh air, The Ritz Tower was exceptional at the time because it was the tallest building in the world (“, the tallest inhabited building in the world, L. Rich people wanted to live in these buildings for at least two reasons. The poster tries to image what could be done for New York to become greener. Avant toute chose, voici les repérages essentiels à faire avant de répondre aux différentes questions : What is it? FIN DU CORRIGE BREVET ANGLAIS 2016 . This is an essay with a clear argumentative goal. votre opinion et défendre vos idées, argumenter vos affirmations pour soutenir votre vision. The scene is set in Manhattan, New York which is proven in the text first in first paragraph, when Eddie is on the Hudson River, and again in the second paragraph, when it says that. pouviez donner des exemples. �U��Q ��3��+�2M`�r ��vH�� f>P�"�?c�W� *�* Voici quelques expressions : First/First of all/Initially/To begin with/To start with, -Ajouter une idée : also, in addition, moreover, furthermore, too, as well, besides, on top of that. of remembering. Unlike our current idea that urban landscapes go against the natural environment, this picture shows that the city landscape can be very green and nature is a dominant part of the scenery. : a. Eddie is critical (“it was overcrowded and overfished” l.5) and worried (“Eddie joined the hermit in his agitation over the constant building in Manhattan” l.19-20)b. Beck is angry (“Beck was known to chase off intruders with a rifle” l.13), Q2. PDF, Corrigé Bac Pro 2017 - Arts appliqués et cultures artistiques, Corrigé Bac ST2S 2017 - Sciences et Techniques Sanitaires et Sociales, Corrigé Bac ST2S 2017 - Biologie et physiologie humaines, Corrigé Bac Pro 2017 - Économie - gestion, BacL/ES2016épreuvesanticipées-sciences-pondichéry. Limit the height of new buildings (“the city placed a limit on the maximum height and bulk of tall buildings” l. 8-9), c. Adapt the shape of the buildings (“architects began constructing “set-back” skyscrapers, with sections of the buildings set back further and further as they rose from their bases” l.13-14). in conclusion, as a conclusion, all things considered, on the whole. En anglais, il n’y a pas de tirets mais des guillemets entre chaque réplique: Be careful to remain close to the original text: both Eddie and Beck are pessimistic and nostalgic. eƌŵit iŶ the agitatioŶ oǀeƌ the ĐoŶstaŶt ďuildiŶg͟ ;liŶe ϮϭͿ, he Đould ͞to kill aŶǇ ŵaŶ ǁho huŶted the ǁildlife͟ ;liŶe ϭϰͿ, 2. - be smiling even if you are in a bad mood: don't show your mood, - be properly dressed (if you work at a hospital, you have to wear a uniform...). Il raconte qu'avant, il travaillait dans un supermarché, qu'on lui a demandé de couvrir ses tatouages avec des accessoires et même de porter des manches longues : il a été victime de discrimination. 3 elements to show Route 66 is neglected nowadays are : Cars no longer use this road becuase other roads were built to regulate the. Vous pouviez mettre en évidence leurs émotions. Impacts: Wild life was rapidly becoming rare, marsh birds were disturbed, and the Harlem, A. Eddie’s feelings about changes? Vous avez désormais accès à des centaines de milliers Il fallait rédiger une introduction contextualisant le sujet, argumenter en deux partie les problèmes et. It ĐaŶ also hide, the walls which are falling down because the building is not kept anymore . endstream endobj startxref TeeŶagers, are dancing and eating in diners , showing the tradicationa American way of, This mural can be seen on a shop in ruins of a city called Mclean along Orute, 66. Lush ne pratique pas de discrimination à l'apparence : chacun accepte l'autre comme il est. Document two shows that, skyscrapers were a progressive movement. ideal city of the future, and try to convince the architects to build it. Cours d'anglais > Examens > Brevet > L'anglais au DNB 2016. Découvrez nos offres adaptées à tous les besoins ! LD professeur d'anglais en BTS (ancienneté plus de dix ans), LauDesth Le sujet est à retrouver également sur Major-Bac en cliquant ici. Il fallait donc ici argumenter en faveur d'une ville plus écologique. Finally, the last two sentences of the second paragraph allow the reader to feel the, agitation that both Eddie and Beck are feeling; “Eddie joined the hermit in his, agitation over the constant building in Manhattan. Découvrez nos offres adaptées à tous les besoins ! A: “Several bridges had recently been built”, “it wouldn’t be long until the countryside, disappeared”, “and north section of Manhattan was still dotted with small farms.”. On devine par élimination. 129 0 obj <> endobj - respect deadlines: outside of work, if there is something you don't feel like doing, you can take your time, but at work, you have to do it on time. Pour vous abonner, merci de recharger votre compte. Épreuve : Anglais Durée de l’épreuve : 2 heures . Lush (boutique de cosmétiques), Google, et Ikea ont la réputation d'être ouverts aux tatouages mais Hilary Jones révèle qu'ils n'ont aucune politique officielle. Many stories happened there. It is an excerpt from the novel The Museum of Extraordinary Things by Alice Hoffman, published in 2014. In the future: it is a fake picture, not a photograph. Write a speech in which you give your vision of the ideal city of the future, and try to convince the architects to build it. The message is that making NYC, greener will allow not only a more harmonious urbanization but it will also be artistic in. Associations for the route try to raise funds to save the route . It is compared with/to a wedding-cake (l.14) and a telescope (l.25), J. B. The story takes place in New York City (“Manhattan” l.16 + l.20, “Hudson” l.3)B. Edie and Beck. The countryside disappearing and the wildlife is destroyed. N'oubliez pas de télécharger notre application pour lire Désolé, votre crédit est insuffisant. Corrige BACES Anglais LV2 2016 : Document A Les réponses en commun sont regroupées entre les ES S et les L A. b a married woman B. she plans on trvavelling on her won across the USA l.8 « why I’m traveling by myself across the country « » l.12 « I wanted an adventure for myself » l.13 « by myself » Reprendre le nom de quelques sites : Hudson, Washington Heights... You are Emma/Phil Wilson, an environmental activist. : Eddie was agitated about the changes; “Eddie joined the hermit in his agitation over the constant building in Manhattan.” o B. Becks feelings about these changes? Vous avez désormais accès à des centaines de milliers There is the value of nature and urbanization. It will a new beginning for thousands of people who live in, I have a few projects to support htis but I need wealthy magnates like you to. Try and use that nostalgia in your essay by relying on their memories of what it used to be but do not forget to mostly talk about their fear for the future, which is the core of the subject. Il fallait choisir entre le sujet 1 et le sujet 2 en plus ou moins 300 mots. He encounters Beck, another fisherman. The third one represents the typical American way of life . • 2. ��O��7��%��]��7ء��G��>$v��B��!�1u��C]d��wժ^��0 ��8 », False ll1-2 « I was almost immediately greeted by support by my husband nd, An example of wanderlust is her craving for traveling l.1 « I decided to embark, IŶ ŵy ǀeiŶs ŵeaŶs it’s a legaĐy froŵ her forefathers . Any answer that is justified with the text would have worked! too l.19. The law was adopted in 1916 because the city authorities were “concerned about diminishing sunlight and fresh air” (l. 7), K. 1. son discours entre arguments pour et contre. Three types of construction: Bridges, pavement in Chelsea, apartment buildings, subway. Therefore , it plays the role of the past ǁe ŵustŶ’t forget . Architects had two choices:b. Un accès à la bibliothèque YouScribe est nécessaire pour lire intégralement cet ouvrage. Deep Club Recommended for you eǆĐeptioŶal ďǇ ďeiŶg ͞higheƌ thaŶ aŶǇoŶe had eǀeƌ liǀed͟ ;liŶe ϮϯͿ. (this is an example of a possible development ), e de nuancer son propos, il est possible d’or. The tallest inhabited building in the, world, it dominated the skyline of Midtown Manhattan…”. The. 2 experiences from the past which explain her will to carry out are : l.5-6 « must have inherited it form my ancestors », l.14 « soŵethiŶg I’ǀe ǁaŶted to do agaiŶ after ŵy auŶt aŶd I droǀe froŵ. C. Time • A: “Several bridges had recently been built”, “it wouldn’t be long until the countryside disappeared”, “and north section of Manhattan was still dotted with small farms.” D. Constructions • 1. E2. • The scene is set in Manhattan, New York which is proven in the text first in first paragraph, when Eddie is on the Hudson River, and again in the second paragraph, when it says that they are in the north of Manhattan. Unlike our current idea that urban landscapes go against the natural environment, this picture shows that the city landscape can be very green and nature is a dominant part of the scenery. conquered land and space. publié le What made the Ritz Tower exceptional (Quote)? ULD��Vӏ��o�.��.�o?L۪��Y�z˻��O�׳zъ��b\��^7�7��F�uZ�32�yu��N��v4Z~��s��P�Jҿ��Iu��W��y�xͼF6�EŜ��.&Ǉ�g�o�(��ng7]��:O.Y)��홈2EI��k��ä��U��.Λ��b�l�f�n�7ժ�zk��@�WYD;��ז9��G��? – For hygiene purposes: when you work with food, you have to wear a uniform so that you don't contaminate the food. Hiller lance un message aux porteurs de tatouages en disant que rien ne devrait les empêcher de réussir professionnellement car il existe de nombreux endroits où leur tatouage ne dérangera personne comme dans le domaine de la menuiserie, de la construction, de la brasserie, ou de la musique. Son bras gauche est couvert de tatouage. 1- On vous demandait de vous positionner par rapport à une citation du texte. Q1. Compréhension écrite du bac d’anglais LV1 2016. Série L LVO et Langue vivante approfondie (LVA), Propriété exclusivedeStudyrama.Toutereproductionoudiffusioninterditesans, Plusieurs exemples de réponses sont donnés à titre indicatif. You write an article for Green Living magazine to denounce the problems raised by these plans and to suggest a few solutions. Progress in this. Vous. You have to first expose the problems related to such a project (destruction of the wildlife, excessive consumption of water with any touristic places, disrespectful tourists…) before offering solutions (to move the resort, to make it the first-ever eco-friendly resort). In document 1, Eddie and Beck view the industrialization period to be negative progress, as New York is losing its farms and wildlife to the new bustling city life. %%EOF M. The Roaring 20s is a period of prosperity before the Great Depression (1929). Avant toute chose, voici les repérages essentiels à faire avant de répondre aux différentes questions : As we saw in the answers to the question, the original text is overwhelmingly nostalgic. Two Reasons why rich people wanted to live in such building, justify with quotes: The rich people wanted to live in skyscrapers because it “was a new way of living for the, rich”, it was a metaphor for being above the common people: they were “higher than, anyone had ever lived”. A new holiday resort is going to be built in, the middle of a nature reserve. Découvrez le corrigé de l’épreuve d’Anglais LVE du BTS Gestion de la PME 2018 Introduction : Cet article daté du 20 juillet 2017 est tiré du site du quotidien britannique The Independent. Les fausses confidences, Marivaux – bac de français, Deuxième République et le Second Empire – bac d’histoire, Comment j’ai eu 20 au bac en SES : mes conseils, Connecteurs logiques et expressions indispensables en anglais, Comment bien décrire une image en anglais, Bac d’anglais : méthodologie de la compréhension écrite, Diversité et inclusion – Diversity and inclusion – Bac d’anglais, L’information à l’heure d’Internet – bac HGGSP, Les Écoles de commerce à Marseille et à Aix, Écoles d’ingénieurs en aéronautique et aérospatial. Eddie Finally decides to talk to Beck. : You are Emma/Phil Wilson, an environmental activist. « awareness » means that the Americans must know about the state in which, route 66 is today . Au Ŷiǀeau de ĐoŶtƌaiŶte d’ĠĐƌituƌe, la ĐoŶǀeƌsatioŶ ŶĠĐessitait uŶe foƌŵe aǀeĐ guilleŵeŶt et tiƌet. These buildings also expressed a “shoot‐for‐the‐moon spirit”, ‘The shoot‐for‐the‐moon spirit”: What does this phrase suggest about the 1920s and the. Both Eddie and Beck are agitated with the changes happening around them; however, Beck has less tolerance and is more violent, whereas Eddie is more passive by avoiding. She has alǁays had this, Her trip illustrates the American spirit insofar as the Americans have always. Baccalauréat LV1 Anglais 2016 séries générales (S - ES - L) corrigé : Baccalaureat General Document A Session 2016 ‐ Anglais Corrigé : Baccalauréat 2016 LV1 Anglaisseries générales Series ES et S A. 3 exemples de compte rendu corrigé en anglais pour le BTS AM; Articles complémentaires : Épreuve d’anglais BTS SAM : écrit (compte rendu, lettre, mail…) Anglais BTS SAM :15 phrases pour réussir sa lettre commerciale ; 3 exemples de compte rendu corrigé : anglais BTS SAM ; Salut, c’est Quentin et bienvenue sur mon blog. In document 3, we see a combination of, both document 1 and 2. DOCX et Vous avez désormais accès à des centaines de milliers A group of architects is running a contest among students in architecture. It is associated with the, goldeŶ age after the seĐoŶd ǁorld ǁar , ǁith roĐk’Ŷ’roll aŶd daŶĐe. Il était bon d'utiliser des linking words pour structurer votre argumentation. La rapport « Colourful Lives » révèle que 33% des personnes interrogées considèrent que s'habiller comme ils le souhaitent améliorerait leur productivité et 66% pensent que cela stimulerait leur sentiment d'épanouissement au travail. Characters • Eddie and Beck are the present characters and they are fishing. CORRECTION BTS 2016 BTS TERTIAIRES ANGLAIS COMPRÉHENSION Cet article, adapté du site internet de The Guardian et publié le 11 Aout 2015 traite de la problématique des tatouages et piercing dans le monde du travail. This mural gives an image of happiness and fun . Découvrez nos offres adaptées à tous les besoins ! aŶd ǁe Ŷeed to keep theŵ aliǀe . You write an article for Green Living magazine to denounce the. And finally, a utopian vision of a street complying with environmental issues. D. 1. �#�5,o#�|ֻ��.ධ�#o$Ơx�u)��2�;�꠲*�Is��l�d�t��K)��P��gӛ#{��jP��swٯ�X�~ G��a-ͣ5�x �,XR��^͛��V��l尒��ώO�& R��ׯ,i%�35�5��+n'�ŭ��iq[�Dq? Use document C to write this speech. vowed to kill any man » → imaginer un discours. Accueil L'anglais au brevet des collèges 1 . O. PDF, Corrigé Bac Pro 2017 - Arts appliqués et cultures artistiques, Corrigé Bac ST2S 2017 - Sciences et Techniques Sanitaires et Sociales, Corrigé Bac ST2S 2017 - Biologie et physiologie humaines, Corrigé Bac Pro 2017 - Économie - gestion, BacL/ES2016épreuvesanticipées-sciences-pondichéry. L'article présente ensuite Hilary Jones qui a des tatouages depuis les années 80. Le sujet et le corrigé d'anglais du BTS 2016. The document portrays, a city that is thriving because they harness nature. h��XmO9�+�xU�[��+UH$4=$J��aV�l��؛�(_�N��x<3�?3vP� )��B��0�X��0� � !K0��h��(̜&�8a�&/�-��(��Q��ۗ�+0�ݻ��h*��},N��j^��M�>�O�? On vous demandait ici de rédiger un discours dans lequel Emma/Phil Wilson, pouviez exprimer, votre vision de la ville idéale Vous deviez également tenter de convaincre des architectes de. On parle des premiers gratte-ciel des années 20 à New York et de comment ils furent perçus par leurs habitants fortunés. %PDF-1.5 %�� Precise Location: The Corner of Fifty‐Seventh Street and Park Avenue in Midtown. Document 2 is, founded on the roaring 20s outlook, where bigger is better. What are: o A. Eddie’s feelings about changes? The authorities must tackle this problem of American legacy under threat . est habituelle et raisonnable compte tenu des sujets proposés. Voici le corrigé du sujet de bac d’anglais LV1 2016 proposé aux séries générales (S-ES-L). The words used to describe this change are mostly negative (“littered” l.6, “overcrowded” l.5) whereas the past seems positive (“pastoral village” l.17). 144 0 obj <>/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<3750D33E662D444FBC068D37A07DE1A9><8EA3D2F9C9687245BACD9BCFE8662586>]/Index[129 29]/Info 128 0 R/Length 86/Prev 176234/Root 130 0 R/Size 158/Type/XRef/W[1 3 1]>>stream attitude of people at that time? The first one is obviously the view offered by such buildings (“, ” l.20-21). Si l’art corporel souffre encore d’une image négative, de plus en plus the passage used terms like “overcrowded”, “overfished”, and “disturbing”. Aucune partie de ce site ne peut être reproduite sans notre autorisation écrite. 2. Il est commun de … N'oubliez pas de télécharger notre application pour lire This phrase suggests that the overall tone of the 1920s and the attitude of the people, during that time was hopeful and aspirational.

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